Flower maiden ([info]blodeuedd83) wrote,

Flash Fiction Friday

Dottie over at Tink's Place has come up with the idea for a Monday Morning Flash Fiction challenge.  Each Monday a new picture prompt will be posted and if you choose to  participate - you post your story on Friday - 350 words, give or take. 

To save a princess
by Blodeuedd


It was the age old tale. A beautiful princess locked away in a castle far far away. A mighty dragon guarding said castle and letting no one pass. Sure princes came now and then, trying to free the princess but they never got far. Not until one day a prince heard of the tale and saw a painting of the princess, how she looked 10 years ago, on her 16th birthday. Beautiful and radiant. A true queen in the making. But this prince was smarter and he knew that if he went there alone then he would rest in a dragon’s belly soon enough. Instead he gathered every soldier he could and enchanted them with words of treasures and riches. And there they went, marching over hills, through valleys, up the mountains until they came to a tower, high up on a peak and with a dragon soaring in the sky.

The battle was fierce. The dragon roared and men fell from the bridge to their death. Some jumped when they were engulfed in flames and their screams haunted the rest. But they fight on and brave young Prince Michel led his men to victory. The dragon was losing ground, a wing hanging limp and the body full of arrows. A spear in the other wing finally brought it down and it crashed into an empty courtyard. They all knew that they now had to get close to slay the beast and they managed to bring down the gate and rushed in. There among rubble and few skeletons of other princes a young woman sat, drenched in blood, holding a young man in her arms. She was crying and lamenting to the gods. The dragon was nowhere in sight, had he fallen through the roof? Michel sent soldiers to find out and approached the woman and saw her beauty. It could be no other than Princess Sarhah. Though the tears she was shedding over some unknown man did not exactly fill him with happiness. But oh well, the man was clearly dead anyway.

“Where did the dragon fall, princess? We will slay it”.

She looked up with tears in her eyes and let go of the man. She staggered towards him and he knew she must be in shock.

“Slay him?” she whispered and he took off his helmet and gave her his best smile.”Aye, I will slay him.”

More he did not say. See this was not a tale of a scared princess, locked away in a tower. This was a tale about an abused princess, fleeing her father, meeting a man, falling in love, and running away to his castle far far away. He guarded her always, with his body, and his heart. Their love knew now boundaries. Thus young Michel’s story ended with a dagger in his heart as he was killed by the princess he was sent to save. And she fled, but not after calling forth her children who was young, but as 5 dragons they rose and killed and ate, until their bellies were full with flesh, and revenge.


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I like it, even if it turned sad, but hahaha


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[info]Anachronist3

March 3 2012, 17:48:18 UTC 2 months ago

So, with five dragon children she managed to pull through - what a pity she didn't think about it while her hubby?/boyfriend?/dragon was slain. How old was she when her first child was born btw? Haha indeed...

[info]blodeuedd83

March 3 2012, 18:31:42 UTC 2 months ago

Ana, evil you. Hubby would not have approved of his kiddies circling the sky eating people. But she was mad and let her poor kids run amok.

How old...well, let's say 17

[info]MelLHay

March 4 2012, 02:16:14 UTC 2 months ago

Oh my, oh my! I do like this. I'm getting to know your writings, I was wondering if the princess really needed saving in the beginning. I really like that her love was the dragon though. And 5 dragon babies! Oh my! LOL!

Wonderful tale!

[info]blodeuedd83

March 4 2012, 07:42:06 UTC 2 months ago

Oh no! You have figured out how I think..I need to process this and try new twists ;=)

[info]lotsatrebble

March 5 2012, 03:15:42 UTC 2 months ago

5 babies? My she was busy! ;) Love the twist. However, the dragonshifter wasn't dead, but only resting... right? RIGHT?

[info]blodeuedd83

March 5 2012, 06:29:36 UTC 2 months ago

..yes.. of course Melissa, he was "resting" ;)
You know, all alone in a castle, they had to do something with their time

[info]Carol Evans

March 5 2012, 20:07:34 UTC 2 months ago

I loved it, even though it was sad. Very nice twist.

[info]blodeuedd83

March 6 2012, 15:42:27 UTC 2 months ago

Thanks :)

[info]seolmara

March 6 2012, 16:41:43 UTC 2 months ago

The beginning really felt like how fairy tales were originally told. This was totally reinforced by the gory ending, lol. And I swear it had a moral in there too: ask the woman FIRST if she needs or wants rescuing before bringing your army, right?

[info]blodeuedd83

March 7 2012, 05:49:42 UTC 2 months ago

Lol. Yes not perhaps the moral of the old tales, but a more modern one :) No one ever asked the women anything in the fairytales. They just come cos women are weak.
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