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Flash Fiction Friday

Amy C over at Romance Book Wyrm and Dottie over at Tink's Place have come up with the idea for a Monday Morning Flash Fiction challenge.  Each Monday a new picture prompt will be posted and if you choose to  participate - you post your story on Friday - 350 words, give or take.  

The House in the Woods
by Blodeuedd


In the middle of the forest there was house.  A beautiful house sitting inside of a huge tree. It was not a big house lengthwise but it was a tall house filled with rooms. Marri had seen the house several times and wondered what it would be walk over the little bridge and knock on the door, but she dared not. Instead she walked by day after day but she never saw anyone that could live in the strange house. She got older and she got married, but still she saw no one. Not until that one day when she crossed the bridge and knocked on the door. Because who would live in a house and never be seen?
The door opened with a creak and she went inside. The first floor was the hall, she saw shoes and a few coats, bit nothing more. She looked at the stair case and went up. The next floor was a tiny little kitchen. There was no dust on the counter and she swallowed.
“Hello?”
No one answered and she went up and came into a little dining room. She went up and up and saw several rooms but she saw no one. Not until she came to the last floor.

In the room stood a beautiful bed made of oak and silk curtains hid it from view. Something made her go forth and she looked in. On the bed lay the most beautiful man she had ever seen. He smiled at her and took her hand. Willingly she let him and he pulled her down next to him.
“I have waited for you to come inside,” he said and kissed her. She closed her eyes and forgot her husband and children. He stroked her back and she arched towards him. She burned for him and her fingers did the work her mind would not confess too. She removed his shirt and felt the muscles play beneath her fingertips. He kissed her clothes away and removed every feeling of guilt in her body and replaced it with a deep need to have him inside of her.
“More,” she said and pulled him even closer. He smiled and trailed a path of kisses down her breasts to her stomach. He looked up with a wicked grin and she laughed as he kissed his way further down.
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Eeek, I can’t write more. Evil Ana challenged me to a erotic duel, and I fear I will blush to death if I continue this ;)

Comments

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MelLHay
Nov. 18th, 2011 03:26 pm (UTC)
LOL! I LOVE it! And I love the picture this week. I miss doing these. They are so much fun!

Oh, and that man! Grrrr.... ;D Great story. And you did wonderfully.
blodeuedd83
Nov. 18th, 2011 06:14 pm (UTC)
Hihi, thanks, and yes come back to us! But then you are doing Nano and that is enough for sure
Bridget anachronist
Nov. 18th, 2011 05:14 pm (UTC)
LOLOLOLOL, not bad for the first time, not bad at all and you are of course a winner because I totally forgot about our duel! *evil grin* I might write something like that the next time, though!

My fav part: He kissed her clothes away and removed every feeling of guilt in her body and replaced it with a deep need to have him inside of her.

It made me wonder - he took her clothes off with his mouth? Like with his teeth? LOLOLOLOL! Don't let your bf read that - he might get ideas! BTW that pair from your story - they should have been interrupted by somebody. It would make you bless less!
blodeuedd83
Nov. 18th, 2011 06:13 pm (UTC)
YOU FORGOT!?!?!?!?! Tsk, and you even reminded me on Wed, or was it only yesterday. The Duel is on!

Well, I did have this idea of him sucking away her soul while they were smexing around, cos strange man who seduces you with one look, well that is not a good man. But that is another story.

Lol, yes I am sure he found ways to rip of those clothes with his mouth

And Sanctuary Tesla rock
Bridget anachronist
Nov. 18th, 2011 05:15 pm (UTC)
I love your new Nicola Tesla avatar btw!
carolsnotebook.wordpress.com
Nov. 18th, 2011 09:30 pm (UTC)
Nicely done, but kinda odd too. Who was he, I wonder, that he could make her forget her regular life so quickly?
blodeuedd83
Nov. 19th, 2011 07:44 am (UTC)
He was not some kind stranger for sure, he has wicked intentions, and not just for making her fall in lust with him. I fear he will not let her go that easy
lotsatrebble
Nov. 18th, 2011 10:59 pm (UTC)
*giggles*
Oh my! More! More! More!

I think it made it even more fun because you admitted you blushed!! :)
blodeuedd83
Nov. 19th, 2011 07:45 am (UTC)
Re: *giggles*
Hihi, I know, I could not write a whole smexing scene so I waited for it to happen a bit, and yikes, how to peeps do it?
Bridget anachronist
Nov. 19th, 2011 11:05 am (UTC)
You see? A bit of bed action and Melissa is sooooo happy all of a sudden! The duel is on, no problem. I will try.

That man in your story - I am sure he used a kind of glamour to seduce her. Maybe he is a fairy?
blodeuedd83
Nov. 19th, 2011 06:43 pm (UTC)
Living in a freaky house..I am sure he is. lol, this shows I just write and then think. He did seduce her, and no one would give it up that easily. So a naughty fairy is what he is. I am sure he used glamour to hide his real self too

This is what he looks like
http://images2.fanpop.com/image/photos/14400000/fat-ugly-troll-merlin-on-bbc-14479281-460-276.jpg
Bridget anachronist
Nov. 19th, 2011 07:36 pm (UTC)
LOL, you mean that how he REALLY looks like, without the glamour and all...it seems that woman's husband will have to intervene!
blodeuedd83
Nov. 20th, 2011 07:35 am (UTC)
Lol, yes really really look like. Poor woman, now I am all grossed out. I destroyed my little eroticstory ;)
gymmom_027
Jan. 15th, 2012 10:03 am (UTC)
B!! You are too funny!!

"Eeek, I can’t write more. Evil Ana challenged me to a erotic duel, and I fear I will blush to death if I continue this ;)" You gotta take the bull by the horns and plow ahead!! LOL!! It ends with:

'....he kissed his way further down to her soften core, the center of her being. She groaned with need, "Please, I need more. Fill me!" She cried with all the passion in her heart.

He smiled, nudging her legs further apart. "I knew I'd always have you. I've watched you for years. You'll never leave me now." He entered her with a great need, and together they found a frenetic pace. Taking and giving, until there was nothing left, and they cried out in unison.

But, with her release, she realized everything she'd given up. Her husband, her family, her very life. "No," she cried, even as she clung to his body. The room grew tighter around her, encasing her and her lover for evermore.

It was rumored in the village that the woman had runaway, from her life, from her responsibilities. Little did they know the woman and her lover remained, always the same, within the tree. The tree of life.'

Couldn't have a HEA, that would have gone too far!!

((big hugs))

Dottie :)
blodeuedd83
Jan. 15th, 2012 04:14 pm (UTC)
*applauds* Well done well done. Now that is what I should have written if I did not have a fear of blushing myself to death. But I like it, hot and that ending is just perfect
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